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    How do you feel about this photography?


    By shun1988, shot with DSC-W80 at 2010-04-09


    Any tips to help me improve?

    :thanks

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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    if you're asking for opinion...
    very good focus on the watch. For me there is a bit much empty space on the left and above the watch. Also the hotspot on the background isn't very attractive. Tighter crop at the top and left would direct the attention towards the watch a little more I think. Also some more of the watch on the right would be good. Play with a composition and see what works.

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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    Hey, thanks!

    That's actually my first time taking pictures, and the first time I use an image editing software ( GIMP ). I'll take the tips!

    Theres too much empty space on the left and above, I know, but i was 'trying' to do the grid technique, i'll have to learn a lot to make some decent pictures!

    Thanks again!

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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    I like it! You've done well... I'd be happy with that!

    Keep shooting!
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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    Quote Originally Posted by ohmegah View Post
    I like it! You've done well... I'd be happy with that!

    Keep shooting!
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    +1 keep up the good work!

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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    focus seems good, although all detail is lost on the band. My eyes immediately go to that big white blotch. I think you are speaking of the 'rule of thirds', which works well, but not in every situation. A good composition can ignore the 'rules' as long as the final product looks good!
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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    thats a nice pic you took..
    really like how its offset
    Last edited by jimmy jones; April 12th, 2010 at 20:05. Reason: forgot

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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    Nice shot:)
    how about black background
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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    Hi Guy's,
    This is one of the Good Example of perfect Photography.it looks good focus on the watch.the hotspot on the background is very attractive and look cool.Thanks.

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    Re: How do you feel about this photography?

    IMHO, your sense of capturing the moment is fine. but in this photograph case only, there's a bit too much empty room, and over exposure of the light in the middle of picture.. the watch itself is a little bit faint and less sharp.. i suggest while we photograph for a watch like kind of Monster, the watch must be positioned as clear and frankly as possible. because the watch characteristic itself is intimadating.

    ok, just my 2 cents fellas.

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