For your printing, what is it you are seeing as a problem explicitly? The sharpness of the text ETEROUS? It does look to me a bit soft and of subpar resolution, but you have it magnified. As with Bavarian, unless your watch is in the higher price ranges, it likely will pass muster.
I note that nothing major is wrong with the printing, no strokes are expressly missing nor are there holes, the most significant sign of lower standards there is the bottom right serif of the T being not quite fully there.
But that brings me to a point I think should be noted - the HALIOS SEAFORTH text that Bavarian is showing as an example, is a sans-serif typeface with a fairly even stroke width. I would wager that it is easier to print it to that level of sharpness and definition than your serif typeface.